This was actually a lot better than your PewDiePie one, you're improvement impresses me. My only suggestion would be to try to make the lines a bit more straight, I've noticed your lines are a bit shaky, so just work on that.
thank you X3 and don't worry, the somewhat shaky lines for the walls ans cush were on purpose. Though the game I'm working on for it will have more straight lines.
Honestly, I'm not trying to be rude, but because this is a review, I will tell you my honest opinion.
It looks to me like people are starring this overly simply because it's PewDiePie. In my opinion, it just wasn't that good. The artwork alone needs a lot of work. The lines were jagged, and slopping. Other than that, the video didn't seem to have a sole point to PewDiePie at all. Simply a vocaloid song and a compilation of what most people find his funniest things. (Barrels, Happy Wheels, Amnesia). I feel it would have been much better if there was a sort of storyline or humour to it, PewDiePie being of the humourous type.
I understand. but like my description says, its my first video. and I'm just starting out. and I really don't care if its just a vocaloid song mixed with pewdiepie. maybe that's how I intended it to be. Actually... that is how I wanted it to be. its just a tribute to Pewdiepie, one of my favorite lets players. And a lot of other people happen to enjoy my artwork. jagged lines or not. And plus, I was rushing a little because I had to make this video within 30 days before that stupid trial ran out. and it took me forever to get everything right in that video and I'm proud of how it turned out. I like my video, and a lot of other people like it too despite all the "flaws" you pointed out.
o-o .......sorry if I was rude.
I. . I love you.
That was great.
This game is so much fun, I really am impressed with it. The artwork is very simple yet appealing to the eye, and the music, I do quite enjoy how it mixes up a bit. The music is fun, and reminds me of old pokemon games actually. Good job, keep up the good work!
This is quite an enjoyable game but it also has it's downfalls.
It's no good when a game reminds you of another game, thus giving the impression that the maker of said game has ripped off the other. A particular game comes to mind with this one; Cut the Rope. Very many things give away Cut the Rope in this game. Firstly, the name of this game. "Slice the Box". Three words, very simplistic and to the point. Second, the music. The music sounds almost exactly like Cut the Rope. Very playful and "bouncy". And third, the colours, the background, overall how it looks.
One more thing, the controls are a bit sticky. When I attempt to click to make a cut, it takes me three or four tries just to get it down, I would work on fixing that.
Your game isn't bad, I like it quite a bit but next time I would advise attempting to use your own style rather than that of a widely known App/Game. You have the talent, apply it in your own unique way!
I do love the storyline, it's interesting and fun.
The game is not too hard, but not too easy either, I especially loved The Portal jokes and the similar yet unique gameplay of Portal, I found the cake joke to be very funny.
> Although, the only downside I have to this game is purely the fact that at points the male seems a bit too much like GLaDOS and the fact that you didn't give any credit to Portal which the game is obviously influenced by. But that's my only con of this game. Other than that, nice artwork, and good playthrough.
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